Dear Visa Officer,

 

My name is XXX.After graduating from the High School of XXX School of Beijing Normal University. I attended XXX College for a brief period of one year.

 

At that time,my parents are operating their own business wholesaling and retailing  environmental technology products.Their business is highly profitable and they decided to let me pursue advanced education in the United States.

 

When they made up of their mind letting me pursue advanced study in the US,I began to make preparations to apply for US schools.Later on my mother became sick and then I decided to quit the college and stayed with my mother for a while and then when my mother got well I went to Shanghai to attend local language training school to prepare to go to US to pursue advanced degree.

 

I did thorough research about the US schools and I particularly wish that in future I may attend one of the elite UC system of schools. I hope that someday I may attend classes with the brightest students from across the globe.

 

I applied and was admitted by XXX College,for it is one of the best Community College in the United States and I researched from the school’s website that it has an exceedingly high transfer rate of its students to UC system of schools.

 

I really cherish this opportunity to study in XXX, and then I will make every effort to improve my GPA and try to stay ahead of the class and then I plan to transfer to one of the UC system of Schools to get a coveted degree in the United States.

 

Afterwards, I will come back to China to find a highly paid and decent job with a multinational company,hopefully in Shanghai or Shenzhen.I feel like living in a vibrant city that is highly international!

 

I truly wish you consider my application for the F1 visa to go to US to attend XXX.Thanks in advance.

 

Sincerely,