申请金融学硕士专业的个人陈述写作案例

Finance Personal Statement Sample


The rapidly changing markets are creating endless opportunities with companies moving towards these markets, where inflows of foreign direct investments result in handsome returns on investment. As the world is increasingly going global, there is a need to understand the interaction between different economies and markets.
 
In the modern globalised world, the key to faster, better decision making for businesses is having solid geographical and economic background. This encouraged me to study Economics in Capital University of Economics and Business, one of China’s finest Universities. The theatrical learning enhanced my ability to critically analyse information as well as develop structured arguments with detail in current affairs. Studying mathematics has improved my numeracy skills, especially statistics where I learned the use of regression line to make predictions and estimate error for model reliability. I enjoy the reliable nature of mathematics and its capability to transform data into future insights, allowing me to improve my diagnostic skills.
 
In school, I led a team of young economic enthusiasts. Reading ‘the Economist’ provided me with material to organise weekly activities with the team, and helped me explain how key economic concepts apply to real-life scenarios. My experience with this team motivated me to compete in various Finance and Economics competitions hosted by my school.
 
I believe a key component in excelling at university is being able to contribute to discussions on topical issues. As captain of school debate team, I learnt that the key to being a great operator is learning how to connect to your audience. This experience assisted me in becoming highly competent in clearly expressing complex issues with clear enunciation. Debating on the topic “Is Deflation proving transitory?” permitted me exhibit quantitative analysis gained from studying Economics, on a macro scale.
 
Studying economics at University enable me to gain the skills to understand complex markets, use theories and frameworks like Porter’s Five Forces and SWOT analyses to assess situations and make a variety of economic decisions. All of these sparks my interest into the wider world of finance. Having lived my formative years in an emerging economy, studying in a UK university will open up opportunities for me to interact with students from other backgrounds and learn how other economies affect global markets.
 

此篇个人陈述是唐老师帮助一个首都经贸大学的经济学本科生申请英国金融学硕士的案例。申请人拿到了剑桥大学，华威大学和伦敦大学学院（UCL)的录取。
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